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此句的主语是现在分词短语,全句的意思是:上大学并不表示我们的未来就一定会光辉灿烂。does not后应跟动词原型follow。
3.Second,have a part time job for poor student is a good way to help reduce his family burden.
此句中有两处错误。have a part ...
此句的主语是现在分词短语,全句的意思是:上大学并不表示我们的未来就一定会光辉灿烂。does not后应跟动词原型follow。
3.Second,have a part time job for poor student is a good way to help reduce his family burden.
此句中有两处错误。have a part time job不能直接作主语,可以改为不定式作主语to have a part time job,或者动名词作主语having a part time job。第二处错误是poor student。普通名词前应有冠词a或the,如前面没有冠词,名词应是复数形式。在这里可选用不定冠词,a poor student,或者poor students。在此句中为了与后半句中的his呼应将其改为a poor student为好。
4.In recent years,fake goods have been discovered more and more in the market.
第四句是中文式的英文,这是考生作文中的常见错误。按照英语的习惯可改为More and more fake goods have been discovered in the market in recent years.
5.The first hand I think is that law must be passed to prevent fake goods from being produced.
第五句中的The first hand是错的,应改为On the one hand;I think是插入成分,在写作中应尽量不使用这样的插入成分;law 前应有冠词,此句经修改后是:On the one hand,a law must be passed to prevent fake goods from being produced.
If Europeans thought a drought was something that happened only in Africa, they know better now. After four years of below?normal rainfall (in some cases only 10 percent of the annual average), vast areas of France, Spain, Portugal, Belgium, Britain and Ireland are dry and barren .Water is so low in the canals of northern France that waterway traffic is forbidden except on weekends.Oyster growers in Britain report a 30 percent drop in production because of the loss of fresh water in local rivers necessary for oyster breeding.In southeastern England, the rolling green hills of Kent have turned so brown that officials have been weighing plans to pipe in water from wales.In Portugal,farmers in the southern Alentejo region have held prayer meetings for rain-so far,in vain.
上段中第二句是主题句,它点明了全段的中心思想,即:四年来,法国、西班牙、葡萄牙、比利时,英国及爱尔兰的降雨量低于常年,这些国家的广大地区都严重缺水。下面的各句都是围绕这一主题展开的。
从上面两段中我们可以看到英语的段落只能有一个中心思想,如要再论述其他与该段中心思想无关的内容应另起一段。