[摘要]
结构不平行
例:I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books.
当使用连词将一系列的单词联接起来的时候,应当使用词性相同或同一类型的短语。
不知所云
例:Many companies began using co...
结构不平行
例:I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books.
当使用连词将一系列的单词联接起来的时候,应当使用词性相同或同一类型的短语。
不知所云
例:Many companies began using computers mouth.
段落过长,不分段
主语与动词一致问题
She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time.
主语和动词在数方面不一致。
句子别扭
We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed.
措辞过长或不清。换言之,句子显得滑稽可笑。
不要使用缩写
在正式的写作中不要使用缩写形式(can’t, dont, its, well, theyve等等) ,而应当使用单词的完整形式 (cannot, do not,it is,we will,they have等等)。
关联词语重复
Since I want to go to a good school, therefore I am trying to raise my test scores.
不能在该句的主要主语和主要动词前使用连词。